Saturday, October 4

the pain of seperation

as i close my eyes
i see you all
laughing,fighting,crying and joking
and living life to the fullest.

your memories still creep into me
bringing me to the verge of tears
all the joys we shared together
and all the tears we cried together.

years have passed since our first meeting
but only now,in this seperation,did i realise
how much i needed you all
and how much i felt for you all.

me,lonely in this island
without you all,
missing you deeply
you and your love

the memories you gave me
some of them sweet and some bitter
will stay in my heart till the end
for they were the most blissful times of my life.....


this poem is in fond memory of all my dearest friends especially ayisha,linda and anupama (and enemies too,how can i forget them?!) of crescent public school,chalakudy.
love you guys!

7 comments:

Unknown said...

kollaamm ..nannayittundu... iniyum ezhuthuka... ente ella vidha bhaavukangalum

Test said...

Ammini,
I liked your poem which is great indeed... i know that such lines came out from the north west corner of your heart...

Mithun Varma said...

all the joys we shared together
and all the tears we cried together

Great thought..
Nice poem..Waiting for more :)

world of love................ said...

ammini chechi
as i know u r a good writer
it's so good
i liked the name of the poem
and also the poem
it's so super]

Unknown said...

Ammini,

Poem valare nannayittund.Iniyum ezhuthanam.

Muthashi (Kodungallur)

Unknown said...

eda ammuuuseeeeee....
adipoli language...... i read your poem...... felt very happy for writing abt us.......... we tooo love u daaaa... bye...

c.s. said...

Nyc poem..it holdz soo much meaning..i lyk it!! *thumbs up*